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Lutra: The Gate (working title)
 A musket ball whistled past Alfred Saxton’s ear, striking a stout oak just a few short meters beyond him. The Doppelsoldner ran faster, trying to distance himself from the Swiss marksman. He weaved between the tall, ancient trees, heading deeper into the thick forest. A few minutes later, he’d lost sight of the ruined and burning caravan all together. Already he somewhat regretted having gone so deep into the woods, he possessed neither map or compass. He felt almost certain that he’d changed direction during his dodging and weaving through the trees, and due to the thick canopy, he could not see the sun to use for directional reference.
 Even so, he reasoned that if he just kept going in his current direction, he’d surely reach a town sooner or later. Alfred stood still for a moment, listening for any sound of pursuit. The forest was eerily silent. The only sounds were the wind, and the quiet flow of a creek. The sound of the water only reminded Alfr
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The Origin of the Great and Derpy Gab-Vee
A young aspiring animator and artist named Gab awoke one summer morning. He groaned, got out of bed, and stretched. As usual, his bad back was bothering him. He headed down the stairs, careful not to wake up the rest of his family. Gab had been expecting an artbook in the mail today, but his folks were not terribly keen on his artistic hobby.
Gab crept over to the door, and found an Amazon package. He quickly grabbed it, and snuck back up to his room. Once there, he opened it, excitedly tearing off the tape and removing all the packing paper. However, instead of the Pokemon artbook that he’d ordered, he found a rather silly looking wand with a little star on the end. Gab let out a groan. Of course the one time he was really looking forward to getting a package, they’d sent him the wrong thing.
Even so, he picked up the silly wand and waved it around aimlessly. How was some crappy piece of plastic supposed to help him? At some point during his aimless waving, the young artis
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TF RP#1
RP #1
Hello everyone, posting this to open up the first round of RPs I will run. These will eventually become a regular occurrence, with a new round starting soon after the previous is finished.
I don't do RP in comments, but notes or discord are fine. If ya know me and already have me added, Skype is ok too.  
Rules/ Limits: Please use paragraph format for posts. So quotes for anything you or characters you control say. NSFW only in private chats, and only if discussed prior. I will not do vore, extreme growth, or extreme weight gain. I also do not do inanimate tfs generally speaking, though I may make exceptions.
Prompts: 1. South American archaeological expedition- based off the "Emperor's Pet" Story, but the TF may differ.
2. Egyptian archaeological expedition
3. Scifi setting- our characters are sent to a planet on a biological survey.
4. Altworld- same setting as my first story.
5. Any other setting ideas you might have.
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Well Deserved Time Off (TF Month Short Story)
"Finally!" Johnny thought aloud as he drove down to the beach. He'd been stuck at his boring job at the theater all week, but he had a day for himself now. On top of this, the air temperature was just about perfect. He'd been looking forward to getting some free time for a while, and it was finally here.
 Johnny reached the beach about an hour later, and began looking for a parking spot. He groaned. There did not seem to be any free parking for miles. He drove around in circles looking for a spot for quite some time, but was still unable to find any. Eventually he came across an old fishing pier, and next to it was a nearly empty beach which seemed to have great waves. "Jackpot!", he thought, not considering why it was so empty. He parked his car in the lot, and walked down to the beach with his stuff.
 After setting his things down, Johnny headed down to the water, swimming out in the hope of catching a good wave. He saw a rather large one in the distance, but his mind didn'
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Peach's Reward (Peach Tf to Koopa Queen)
It was another typical day in the Mushroom Kingdom. Toads strolled the streets and played and worked the day away. The sun shined down upon the land from above, and Princess Peach watched over her kingdom from her castle. Of course, also as usual, the Princess was rather worried that Bowser would appear and trash the place, AGAIN.
The princess’ worried musings were interrupted by a quiet little knock at her door. She opened it, and was somewhat surprised to see an out of breath Mailtoad standing in the doorway. “Here…..” He passed her a carefully wrapped package. “Someone dropped this at the post office and said it was urgent. I figured it might be rather important, so I’ve brought it directly to you.” Peach thanked the Mailtoad and showed him out. Once that was done with, she looked at the package quizzically. She hadn’t been expecting any mail, and things seemed to be relatively normal at the moment. She opened the package. Inside was a
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Emperor's Pet
A pair of young treasure hunters had just discovered a new ancient structure deep within the Amazon. No one knew exactly what was inside, but local legends suggest that it is full of gold, and other, unimaginable riches.
The entrance was a simple doorway, covered with ancient writing which would be difficult to decipher. Rough rune-form shapes protruded at seemingly random spots in the door.
"Well, ready for another temple to explore?" Johnny said, cracking his neck and putting on a pair of work gloves.
“Definitely.”, answered Alfred, the second of the pair. “We are going to be rich, famous, or both if we make it back with any loot or artifacts”
Alfred approached the doorway, looking for a way to open the door. "Unless it's sealed, there should be a lever or button, or simply a place to push on.  See if you can’t find anything like a particularly worn area or an area that is cooler than the rest of the door."
After a good half hour of careful examinat
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AltWorld VR TF/TG Part 3
Upon returning to the apartment, the pair looked through their belongings.
After a while of going through her personal effects and finding little of interest, Alicia decided to take a shower before they went out. After making sure that she had a towel hung on the hook on the door, the otter disrobed, and turned on the shower. As she waited for a moment for the water to warm up, she glanced at herself in the mirror. If she'd been her old male self, she might have been attracted to this body. But now, even seeing her entire female self for the first time in the mirror, she felt nothing. Not even a twinge of attraction. Alicia supposed that confirmed the further progression of a certain mental change she'd been somewhat dreading. Even so, she still was not frightened. It just felt normal. she hopped in the shower, and began attempting to clean out her fur and hair with the shampoo. The warm water helped ease her stress a little, and by the time she exited the shower, she felt much better
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Dragon's Due (TF Story)
A dragon hatchling looked up at its mother as she prepared to leave to hunt for food. After ensuring that the hatchling was safely within their mountain cave home, the mother left, hoping to kill a deer or two in order to feed the hatchling. The hatchling, along with its mother possessed gems of a sort mounted within the scales of their chests. These gems were the source of the dragon’s magical abilities, which generally consisted of breath related attacks, but on occasion could provide a dragon temporary powers beyond the simple breath spells in times of need.
A short time after its mother’s departure, the hatchling caught a glimpse of a butterfly just outside the cave entrance, the movement of the insect catching its attention. Incapable of flight, the hatchling pounced at it with nearly feline grace, but only just missed it. The hatchling followed the butterfly, lunging at it over and over, with each leap leading it further and further from the nest.
Meanwhile, a young k
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AltWorld VR TF/TG Part 2
As the darkness cleared from Alfred’s vision, he found himself to be in a new room entirely. This room, instead of being a sealed plain white structure, seemed to be part of an apartment. The room was rectangular, and had two beds, with a few windows lining the wall. Two dressers stood in opposite corners near the door. He turned around, and behind him has a blue vixen anthro, who had a look of worry upon her face.
“Hello?” Alfred said, wondering if he would get a response.
The vixen looked at him,“Hi?”
“Are you another player?”, Alfred asked.
“Yeah.” The vixen replied in a shaky voice. “I logged in with a friend, and the employee said that we’d spawn in the same place….”
“Johnny?” Alfred said questioningly.
“Alfred?” The vixen began to look slightly less stressed. “I was worried for a moment we’d not spawn near each other.” The vixen began to walk away from the wall,
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AltWorld VR TF/TG Part 1
Two college students, Alfred and Johnny, approached a short grey building. Above its main entrance hung a sign with the text “Altworld VR”.  
“Well, here it is.” Alfred said needlessly to Johnny. “We’ll finally be able to try out the beta that new VR system that this company sent invites to us for.”
Johnny turned his head towards Alfred and asked; “ Do you think it will be any good?”
“I sure hope so”, Alfred replied. “I’ve waited for real virtual reality for years, and this is supposed to be the real deal, so I hope their advertising and statements match up with the real system.”
“Any idea what game or program in particular they are going to have us test?”, Alfred asked as they approached the doorway.
“I heard that it was sort of a simulation of life in the city.” Johnny answered. “Other than that, I really don’t know. “
“That could be interesting if
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The coloring and shading on this piece is quite excellent. The changes seem natural, and do not contrast horribly with her body. Indeed...


Like most of your other works, I really liked this piece. The coloration is quite good, though that's pretty standard for you. (Can't t...


This is quite a good piece really. You've actually represented her very well for someone unfamiliar with the character. Not only is her...


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 A musket ball whistled past Alfred Saxton’s ear, striking a stout oak just a few short meters beyond him. The Doppelsoldner ran faster, trying to distance himself from the Swiss marksman. He weaved between the tall, ancient trees, heading deeper into the thick forest. A few minutes later, he’d lost sight of the ruined and burning caravan all together. Already he somewhat regretted having gone so deep into the woods, he possessed neither map or compass. He felt almost certain that he’d changed direction during his dodging and weaving through the trees, and due to the thick canopy, he could not see the sun to use for directional reference.


 Even so, he reasoned that if he just kept going in his current direction, he’d surely reach a town sooner or later. Alfred stood still for a moment, listening for any sound of pursuit. The forest was eerily silent. The only sounds were the wind, and the quiet flow of a creek. The sound of the water only reminded Alfred of his great thirst- during his flight from the burning caravan, he had not had time to grab a waterskin. He eagerly followed the sound, and mentally prayed for it to be untainted. After a few minutes of walking, he found the source. He let out a quiet groan when he saw that it was entirely clouded with mud, and was completely unsuitable for drinking. He followed it, hoping the water would be clearer upstream. He walked on for quite sometime, softly whistling a marching tune to himself.


 After some time of walking, he came across what looked like the ruins of a church. Most of the walls seemed to have collapsed long ago, though  a few still stood, along with a great stone arch, which presumably had once been the doorway. He ran a hand along the mossy stones of a ruined wall as he passed under the arch. Just as he was about to reach the other end of the arch, there was a flash of white light, which blinded the doppelsoldner for a moment. He rubbed at his eyes, trying to clear his vision. Once he succeeded, Alfred was greeted with a sight that genuinely shocked him. The ruin he had just exited was gone, and he was left standing in an empty meadow at the foot of a short hill. His surroundings seemed entirely unfamiliar.

 He un-shouldered his Zweihander, and spun, searching for any opponent. But there was no one there. He was truly alone. The thought occurred to Alfred that he could be dead and that this could be heaven, or some form of it. He discounted this, and looked about, trying to discern where he was. He found nothing familiar, but he did find another creek and this one was actually clear. Alfred’s thirst finally got the best of him, and he knelt down, and filled his waterskin and began to gulp down some of the water. A burning agony seemed to course through his body, and Alfred almost fell into the creek from the shock. Every bone in his body ached and seemed to move. His body slimmed, becoming sleek and lanky. His spine extended, growing out into a rudder like tail. His head and neck changed, and then the changes spread all over his body, causing the doppelsoldner further agony. He let out a final scream of pain, almost blacking out. But then, the pain simply stopped, and Alfred was left by the creek bed. He bent over the water, looking at his changed visage. He ran a shaking paw over the slight muzzle that protruded out. Feeling that it was there, and this was all real, and also feeling the new tail flick behind him, he fainted and he fell face first into the creek bed.
Lutra: The Gate (working title)
This is the beginning of the on-going story I mentioned that I was working on. I hope you all will enjoy it, and there will be more to come soon. By mid June I should have more time to write, and I hope to eventually make a more regular schedule. 
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The coloring and shading on this piece is quite excellent. The changes seem natural, and do not contrast horribly with her body. Indeed, the curves in particular are well done, and add to the visual of her changing form. The way the clothes are tearing also seems natural and not so contrived.

Hands are the hardest things to change well, and I think you put a lot of effort into it when you didn't have to. In a way it would look more natural to have the partially changed hand closer to being a full hoof. I reckon it would be easier to draw and would look just as good if not better.
Sorry for my longer than planned interim between stories, my next piece will be longer than most of my other recent stories, and hopefully of higher quality as well.
Like most of your other works, I really liked this piece. The coloration is quite good, though that's pretty standard for you. (Can't think of any of your works where the coloring wasn't good) I also quite like how the changes are not occurring on just flat lines, it seems to be happening asymmetrically. So yet again, I must say this is a job well done.

My only real critique would be the face. It looks very good, and it seems to me like it was likely very hard to draw, just because of the awkward head angle. You show the growing muzzle very well, but it would most likely be easier to make from a side view, or if you drew the head as being more draconian. That being said, despise the somewhat awkward angle, the head and face still looks extremely good. This is definitely a new favorite for me.
It's been a few weeks since I've posted (or written) a story. Sadly I was unable to work on anything at the hospital, though I did try to keep up with as many of you as I could. So for any of you that I offered RPs to but didn't start or finish, just not me.

Now onto new business. 

See, I haven't posted any material with my otter oc, Alfred Saxon on DA as of yet. I aim to fix that, so in addition to future tf stories, I plan to write some stories with him as one of the primary characters. Might be a while before any of those are released as I want to ensure quality and actually write something that I like and that I think you guys will like as well. So yeah, there is that to look forward to in the future. I may start off with some sorter pieces or stand alone stuff, but eventually I hope to make something that can be ongoing.

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PokeNerd2499 Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Hey, are we gonna start that RP soon?
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alftheotter Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2017
Yeah. Sorry about the wait, was in the hospital a for week.
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PokeNerd2499 Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Oh jeez! What happened?
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alftheotter Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2017
My lung partially collapsed, just by random chance. (Called a Pneumo Thorax btw). Anyway, I'm fine now, just really sore.
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The-shadow-demon Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2017
thanks for the watch :)
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alftheotter Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2017
Sure. I've actually been looking at your stuff for quite a while- since before I even made this account actually. I just realized I hadn't actually added you to my watch list today.
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Heya, thanks for the watch!
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alftheotter Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2017
Sure. I really liked that charmander pick you posted. 
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thanks for the watch
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Sure
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